简洁一些好.
I tell you about a terrible thing. Yesterday afternoon, I stayed at home and only wore underclothes. while I was cleaning the room, I looked that the doorway was also very dirty. So I wanted to clean it, when I went out of the door, the strong wind blew and shut the door. I was very nervous and worried because there was nobody else in the house. What a terrible! I didn't know when they came back home. Afterward, I found a big hop-pocket and wrapped myself. At that time, there was repair man in the opposite house, I didn't dare to stand the door. Fortunately there were many newspapers at the gate, I read the newspapers on the stairs the whole afternoon. The weather was very hot, but I only sat at the gate and waited my friends coming. Later, my friends did not go home until 7:00PM. Of course I had wasted many time and could not finish my plan.
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I tell you about a terrible thing. Yesterday afternoon, I stayed at home and only wore underwear. While I was cleaning the room, I saw that the doorway was also very dirty, so I wanted to clean it. When I went out of the door, the strong wind blew and shut the door. I was very nervous and worried because there was nobody else in the appartment. How terrible! I didn't know when they would come back home. Afterwards, I found a big hop-pocket and wrapped myself. At that time, there was repair man (just one man or several?) in next door's appartment, I didn't dare to stand at the door. Fortunately there were many newspapers at the gate, I read the newspapers on the stairs during the whole afternoon. The weather was very hot, but I only sat at the gate and waited for my friends' return. Later, my friends did not come home until 7:00PM. Of course I had wasted much (or "a lot of") time and could not finish my plan.
Revised:
I tell you about a terrible thing. Yesterday afternoon, I stayed at home and only wore underwear. While I was cleaning the room, I saw that the doorway was also very dirty, so I wanted to clean it. When I went out of the door, the strong wind blew and shut the door. I was very nervous and worried because there was nobody else in the appartment. How terrible! I didn't know when they would come back home. Afterwards, I found a big hop-pocket and wrapped myself. At that time, there was repair man (just one man or several?) in next door's appartment, I didn't dare to stand at the door. Fortunately there were many newspapers at the gate, I read the newspapers on the stairs during the whole afternoon. The weather was very hot, but I only sat at the gate and waited for my friends' return. Later, my friends did not come home until 7:00PM. Of course I had wasted much (or "a lot of") time and could not finish my plan.
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